Your breath upon my shoulder
I feel you,
Skin on skin
Hold me close,
Surround me
Feed me from within.
Awaken me with passion
Fill me with desire
Burn me
With hot kisses
Your mouth, your tongue
The fire.
I quake in sweet surrender
We knock
At heaven’s gate
Fill my mind with wanting you
My heart, my love
My mate.
“Good Morning!”
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Oh. My. Gosh…. this poem is absolutely divine… thank you for sharing your ‘poet’ gifts with the world Kitt!! MUAH!! ♥ Ande
Thanks so much, Ande! I consider that high praise from a sensualist like you.
Oooh! That is so GOOD! What a gift for poetry you have! 🙂
Thanks, Mae! I enjoy the subtle imagery poetry is able to accomplish.
Exquisite torture.
::big grin:: I’ve always thought so.
nice 🙂
is it “fill my mind” though?
“mine” also feels right
Good catch. That was definitely a typo, though, you’re right, both could work. Fixing it now.
You really do come up with some good stuff.
LOL! Thanks. Poetry about sex…in a sensual way, not in your face porn…more erotica. 😉
I really like it. Of course I like in your face porn too lol
True…and there’s a time and place for that…just not on my blog. 🙂
LMAO, yea the time and place is on mine LOL
LMAO!