When tears,
Unchecked,
Rain heavy
On your heart
While winds of change
Howl mercilessly,
Whipping through,
Against battered soul,
Devastation in it’s wake.
Shattered
Doesn’t have to mean
Destroyed.
Pieces can be
Picked up,
Put together,
Creating something beautiful,
Renewed and stronger.
Roots spread deep
In the fertile soil
Of
Heartache, pain
Love, loss…
Feed your re-growth,
With lessons learned,
Empathy,
Kindness,
Generosity of spirit.
Become
Your own destiny,
Your salvation.
It occurred to me that although this month is National Poetry Month, I haven’t yet celebrated it with one of my own works. Part of it was that I was feeling heart broken. I realized that it was time to use the grief I was feeling over the loss of a friend and the worry over some family and friend health issues toward something more constructive.
So here’s my attempt to redirect the turmoil I’ve been feeling lately. Hope you guys like…
We also lost a childhood friend recently… A guy named David Lamb. He was an artist in his craft….music. He was part of a band called Brown Bird.
May you all feel the warmth of love, friendship, and self reliance. I hope you all see the beauty within yourselves that I see in you. May you reflect beauty and love on your own paths as you walk through life.
Beautiful poem, Kitt, poignant and touching. I wasn’t familiar with Brown Bird before, but your friend was obviously very talented. I followed the link you shared and it sounds like he (and his wife) touched a lot of lives.
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Thanks, Mae. David was extremely talented. In fact, his entire family shared the gift. I grew up singing with his older sister while he hung out with my younger brother. The tribute paid back by those whose lives he’s touched along the way has been beautiful to see (and hopefully a comfort to his wife).
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Aw hun I’m sorry to hear you lost one of your friends. That’s just heartbreaking. Lots of love and good thoughts for you and his family. ❤
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Thanks, Anna. I appreciate it.
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I’m so sorry for the loss of your friend, Kitt. David sounds like he was a pretty special guy, and the response by his fans to help him proves it. I’ve been watching some of his videos. Looks like heaven got a really talented musician.
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Yes it did. 🙂 It helped me (and his brother & sister) to think my brother was there to greet him & show him around. I’m keeping his family and his wife in my prayers.
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I’ve got some family there who will enjoy getting to know him, and listening to his music. Especially a cousin who had his own band when he was alive. Yes, his family will need a lot of prayer. Even when you know they’re in heaven, it’s still hard to be without them.
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Exactly. My brothers have been gone for 30 years & I still miss them like crazy.
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I’ve not lost any siblings, thank God, but I have lost some really close family members, so I know how you feel. 😦
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So sorry to hear about your friend. What a tragedy. beautiful song. breaks my heart.
and your poem….gor.geous.
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Thanks, Beth. I think it’s kind of beautiful…the legacy of beautiful music and love that he’s left behind.
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I’m sorry for your loss and recent turmoil, Kitt, but as your poem suggests, we must experience these tough times in order to be more firmly grounded and well-rounded human beings.
Your poem was wonderful. Concise, direct and comforting.
I hope life’s joys find you again soon.
Patricia Rickrode
w/a Jansen Schmidt
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Thanks, my friend. I’m glad I got the chance to know him.
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Sorry for your loss, Kitt. What a beautiful way to remember your friend though. Thank you for sharing his memory with us. *hugs*
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*hugs back* Thanks, Jess.
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So sorry about you feeling sad, kitt, but you are redirecting those feelings in a way that touched me deeply.
I also loved the song.
Hugs.
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Thanks, Jessi. Writing and music have always helped soothe my inner demons. *hug*
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A really lovely poem 🙂
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Thank you.
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So sorry for your losses, Kit! 😦 What a great way to channel your grief. You can tell the poem came right from the heart. Hugs! xo
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Thanks, Maria! I truly appreciate that.
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My condolences darling and sorry I haven’t been in sooner. You need to write and post more poetry, your love and heartfelt words shine through. x
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Thank you, my lovely & talented friend. Unfortunately I don’t have as much time for writing as I once did. This transition with this new job has been taking much of my time & sapping my energy.
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Aww aren’t you sweet. Thank you. I know the feeling, I am now cleaning houses, conducting services and studying to be a marriage celebrant and dealing with my daughters issues..I have no energy right now 😦
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Exactly! Work/life balance is important, though. I need to find it again & soon. I’ll keep you in my prayers that your balance will be found as well.
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Thank you sweetheart x
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Gorgeous poem, Kitt! It reads like a song, unsurprisingly. 🙂
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Thanks, August!
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Such a wonderful poem Kitt. I am so sorry to herr about the loss of your friend. I am also going through some family heath isues. Stay strong.
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Thanks, Phil. You and your family have been in my thoughts, too.
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